Brian
@bcdefg123
Age 33, Male
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Ohio
Joined on 2/16/10
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I played through a bit. Not bad for a beta. The only major issue I found was regarding the music overlapping itself, which you had already mentioned. I'm actually pretty surprised at the grammar and spelling too, haha. No mistakes that I know of. Good job.
bcdefg123
Thanks. I already fixed most of that stuff. And for an RPG, good grammar and spelling is essential- otherwise, it'd just be crap. I actually have an editor too, but unfortunately she didn't get to do much since I was always changing the scenes XD